I've been writing about silicon valley and work culture and advanced capitalism in a similar vein. I have just scanned this, but will read more closely asap. Like your use of Deleuze, control society, Pfaller on Interpassivity, and Debord. See two series of mine, if interested: https://www.indarktimes.com/tedd-talk-darkening-silicon-valley-technological-utopianism/. Also, more recently: https://www.indarktimes.com/prologue-the-refusal-of-work-as-we-know-it/